Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 24 September 2018

Describing the Fun Run

I felt exhausted at the end.
I felt puffed when I went down the hill.
I never gave up.
I heard stomping when people were jumping over the hurdles.
By Lulu

I felt nervous at the start.
I saw dots and hurdles and hoops.
I wondered how Bailey felt when she fell over.
I waited for her.
By Imogen C

I felt like an express train because everywhere I went I was really fast.
I felt happy because I finished the race.
I felt super puffed at the end of the race.
By Wade

I felt happy because I came first.
My tummy hurt because I ran so fast.
By Levi

I felt proud at the start line.
I heard hands clapping and feet stomping at the start line.
I saw some people at the finish line after and before me.
I wonder who came first.
By Avleen








I felt proud because I came in third place.
I felt so tired.
I saw peoples legs flying and vests.
I heard cheering, puffing and stomping.
I wondered if next time I would come in the same place.
By Imogen

I felt nervous at the start because there were lots of parents looking at me.
I heard talking at the finish line.
I felt excited because I came fourth.
I wonder if I can win next time.
By Leafaye

I felt nervous because it was my first time.
I heard clapping and cheering.
I felt sore because I fell over.
By Bailey


Wednesday, 30 May 2018

If the Dinosaurs Came Back


We read 'If the Dinosaur came back' by Bernard Most. 
We then made our own books using book creator on the iPad. We learned how to use the camera function and recording function.